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DZ-126: Secrets and Clues
How can Secrets and Clues motivate characters?
DZ-126: Secrets and Clues
Listen if you want to understand how hidden information drives character motivation and plot structure!
⏱ 1h 28m
Structure · Character · Scenes |30 Apr 2026
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“Getting information puts your character in danger. And danger rewards your character with information." — One of three ideas we steal from game design in this episode. In this two part series, we talk about how secrets, clues and hidden information motivate characters and may (or may not) help you plot from a character perspective. Part One (this episode) looks at WAKE UP DEAD MAN; while Part Two looks at SIDE EFFECTS, and the pilot episode of SHRINKING…
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AIStu, Chas, and Mel break down how Benoit Blanc is pulled through the story by his need to solve the case while Father Judd is pushed through against his will to prove innocence--two distinct motivation engines for dual protagonists.


"We’re oscillating between push and pull, right? In a way, learning information is pull, danger is push. So you’re talking about a way of creating a narrative energy from oscillating between those two."

Stu Willis  |  DZ-126: Secrets and Clues


Recent Episodes

DZ-125: Oscars One-shot - BLUE MOON
What craft tools make a low-budget, contained, period drama riveting?
DZ-125: Oscars One-shot - BLUE MOON
Listen if you want to understand how narrative POV, screenplay format, and dialogue craft can elevate a contained biopic into an Oscar-nominated film
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BLUE MOON is a talky, period-drama that film about an obscure songer-writer in the 1940s. Yet, it attracted world-class talent AND Academy Award nominations, including for it’s script. Join Chas & Mel as they explore how narrative POV, interweaving relationships, hooky dialogue, and even the screenplay format itself make the script for BLUE MOON so great…
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AIChas and Mel dissect how nearly every line of dialogue functions as a hook, a play on words, or a callback, with pop culture references woven through 1940s context in ways that don't require prior knowledge to land, and how this demands performers who can keep up with the repartee.


DZ-124: Making the Despicable Compelling
How does Film Noir show us terrible people doing terrible things without endorsing it?
DZ-124: Making the Despicable Compelling
Listen if you need audiences to root for characters who do terrible things
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Mel and Chas continue to explore what Noir (the genre) can teach writers of all other genres. In particular:…
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AIThe episode shows how voiceover and character motivation--giving audiences access to why a character makes an incredibly stupid but understandable choice--lets you jump over narrative hurdles that might otherwise lose the audience.


DZ-123: Flawed Characters in Noir
What can Film Noir teach us about character arcs and audience engagement?
DZ-123: Flawed Characters in Noir
Listen if you want to write morally compromised characters without endorsing their choices.
⏱ 1h 22m
Character · Theme · Scenes |31 Dec 2025
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In this two part series, Mel and Chas use Noir (the genre) as a lens to interrogate flawed characters. How can characters doing reprehensible things still engage audiences? How can you ensure representation isn’t endorsement? And whether these characters undergo transformative arcs, or simply reveal their true natures…
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AIMel and Chas argue whether Neff and Marlowe undergo transformative arcs or simply reveal who they always were, asking whether change means doing something different or allowing your true nature to emerge.



Foundational Episodes

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DZ-61: Unfilmables 2 - Moments of Awe
How can unfilmables help you create those cinematic moments of awe?
In this second part of our series on unfilmables, Chas and Stu continue their deep dive into how writing the “unfilmable” can enhance your script. Rather than looking at micro moments, they turn their gaze to “moments of awe” — those often breathtaking cinematic moments that feel beyond writing. But are those scenes actually unscriptable…
⏱ 2h 5m
Words · Genre · Theme | 25 SEP 2019
Listen if you're writing a moment that feels too big for the page (but you need it on the page).
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DZ-8: Status Transactions
How does a shift in status or power reveal character?
Stu and Chas explore an idea they both came across studying theatre: status and by extension (or juxtaposition) power. Is a story where a character changes status or experiences loss (or gains) in power more compelling…
⏱ 1h 32m
Character · Scenes | 10 JUN 2014
Listen to make your character relatinships more dynamic.
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DZ-21: Scene Transitions and the Hook
How can scene transitions do more than just move from one location to another?

Stu and Chas look at one of the basic building blocks of a script: scene transitions. Transitions don’t just move you from one scene to another in a slick way, they can help you compress time, enhance thematic connections, unify different story threads, orient (or disorient) your reader… and just make your script feel more like a movie…

⏱ 1h 40m
Process · Scenes · Theme | 7 MAY 2015
Listen to understand how transitions compress time, enhance thematic connections, unify story threads, and orient your reader
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DZ-3: Making Unlikeable Protagonists Compelling
How do you make obnoxious a-holes compelling
Stu and Chas delve into unlikable protagonists in comedy. How do filmmakers keep us watching characters who should alienate us? To answer this question, Stu and Chas look at the first 20 pages of HOT FUZZ, AS GOOD AS IT GETS and - of course - GROUNDHOG DAY…
⏱ 1h 20m
Character · Audience · Genre | 30 MAR 2014
Listen if you want to understand how filmmakers make audiences care about deeply flawed protagonists
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DZ-55: Character Motivations 1
What to do when a reader says "I don't buy that he/she would do that"?
Chas & Stu look at examples of good character motivation. We’ve all watched movies where we don’t believe the motivation of a character or characters. We may have even written scripts where readers don’t buy the character’s choices. And that’s often a real problem because most of these choices coincide with key structural moments — e.g. the moments where the characters decide to do something “out of character” in order to progress to the next part of the story. To help us solve the problem of how to improve our character motivations, in this episode we explore great examples of character motivation and how they have helped the audience believe a character’s decision…
⏱ 2h 18m
Character · Structure | 15 JAN 2019
Listen if you're writing a scene where your character does something 'out of character' and your readers to buy it.
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DZ-49: Antagonists! 1 - vs Humans
What makes a strong human antagonist?
Prompted by a listener (and patron of the podcast) question, Stu and Chas dive into antagonistic forces. And because Draft Zero does not do anything by halves, this is Part One of a Five Part Epic Exploration™ into antagonists; namely: vs humans, vs self, vs nature/supernatural, vs systems and “other”. aka the classic narrative conflicts…
⏱ 1h 20m
Character · Structure · Scenes | 31 MAR 2018
Listen if you want to understand how to craft compelling antagonists who oppose your protagonist through direct human conflict
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