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DZ-126: Secrets and Clues
How can Secrets and Clues motivate characters?
DZ-126: Secrets and Clues
Listen if you want to understand how hidden information drives character motivation and plot structure!
⏱ 1h 28m
Structure · Character · Scenes |30 Apr 2026
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“Getting information puts your character in danger. And danger rewards your character with information." — One of three ideas we steal from game design in this episode. In this two part series, we talk about how secrets, clues and hidden information motivate characters and may (or may not) help you plot from a character perspective. Part One (this episode) looks at WAKE UP DEAD MAN; while Part Two looks at SIDE EFFECTS, and the pilot episode of SHRINKING…
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AIStu, Chas, and Mel break down how Benoit Blanc is pulled through the story by his need to solve the case while Father Judd is pushed through against his will to prove innocence--two distinct motivation engines for dual protagonists.


"Narrative velocity is what drives a player character to do something. And when we talk about this in screenwriting, we talk about activating the character, making the character active."

Stu Willis  |  DZ-126: Secrets and Clues


Recent Episodes

DZ-125: Oscars One-shot - BLUE MOON
What craft tools make a low-budget, contained, period drama riveting?
DZ-125: Oscars One-shot - BLUE MOON
Listen if you want to understand how narrative POV, screenplay format, and dialogue craft can elevate a contained biopic into an Oscar-nominated film
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BLUE MOON is a talky, period-drama that film about an obscure songer-writer in the 1940s. Yet, it attracted world-class talent AND Academy Award nominations, including for it’s script. Join Chas & Mel as they explore how narrative POV, interweaving relationships, hooky dialogue, and even the screenplay format itself make the script for BLUE MOON so great…
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AIMel and Chas break down how Blue Moon's almost total commitment to Larry Hart's perspective--he's absent from only two beats in the entire film--shapes both the script's structure and the audience's emotional experience of his decline.


DZ-124: Making the Despicable Compelling
How does Film Noir show us terrible people doing terrible things without endorsing it?
DZ-124: Making the Despicable Compelling
Listen if you need audiences to root for characters who do terrible things
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Mel and Chas continue to explore what Noir (the genre) can teach writers of all other genres. In particular:…
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AIThe episode shows how voiceover and character motivation--giving audiences access to why a character makes an incredibly stupid but understandable choice--lets you jump over narrative hurdles that might otherwise lose the audience.


DZ-123: Flawed Characters in Noir
What can Film Noir teach us about character arcs and audience engagement?
DZ-123: Flawed Characters in Noir
Listen if you want to write morally compromised characters without endorsing their choices.
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Character · Theme · Scenes |31 Dec 2025
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In this two part series, Mel and Chas use Noir (the genre) as a lens to interrogate flawed characters. How can characters doing reprehensible things still engage audiences? How can you ensure representation isn’t endorsement? And whether these characters undergo transformative arcs, or simply reveal their true natures…
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AINeff's motivation to help Phyllis boils down to 'I would like to sleep with you,' and Mel emphasizes he's 'just lying to himself' about the nobler justifications he constructs for the murder.



Foundational Episodes

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DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue 2 - Hook and Eye
How can you create flow and contrast in your dialogue?
A full three years after the first instalment (and one of our most popular), Stu and Chas have kidnapped Stephen Cleary to once again develop some craft tools around dialogue. It would be fair to say that - in that time - all three have learnt a lot more about dialogue than they knew in 2016. It would be also fair to say that Stephen perhaps learnt a little more through his research into “genderlect”…
⏱ 1h 58m
Process · Scenes · Character | 31 DEC 2019
Listen when you're rewriting dialogue and want to create connection between characters.
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DZ-4: Catharsis and the Post-Coital Cigarette
How does the end of certain films make your soul shudder?
Stu and Chas are joined by their first guest – illustrious script developer and producer Stephen Cleary – to explore how certain films can trigger an outpouring of emotion from the audience. Turns out that Aristotle may have figured it out a few thousand years ago and called it Catharsis…
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Audience · Structure | 14 APR 2014
Listen if you want to make you endings great!
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DZ-50: Antagonists! 2 - vs Self
How can characters be their own antagonist?
In Part Two of our Five Part Epic Exploration™ into antagonists, Chas & Stu take a look at “vs self” stories. Stories where the protagonist (or main character) serves as their own antagonist as well as the antagonist for those around them…
⏱ 1h 47m
Character · Structure | 19 APR 2018
Listen if you want to understand how protagonists can serve as their own antagonist and how antagonistic forces shape a character's journey
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DZ-41: Theme and Worldview
How can your characters' worldview dramatise your theme?
In this episode, Stu and Chas tackle one of the more esoteric topics in screenwriting (and writing in general): theme! To help us tackle this topic, we decided to look at television pilots, because we felt that television requires the theme to be more explicit. Our zig-zagging (and long) discussion covers thematic engines, music themes, thematic loglines, punishment vs reward, and - perhaps most of all - the worldview of characters…
⏱ 2h 32m
Theme · Structure · Process | 24 MAR 2017
Listen if theme feels abstract - we talk how how to make it visible through what characters believe.
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DZ-5: Shifting audience point of view and heightened emotions
Can forcing your audience to ask questions - and then answering them - trigger an emotional response?
Stu and Chas delve into audience point of view - not character point of view! Does your audience know more, less or the same as your characters? And does changing this within a scene trigger or heighten the desired emotional response…
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Audience · Scenes · Structure | 27 APR 2014
Listen to learn about the most powerful tool in screenwriting: narrative POV.
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DZ-16: Masters of Time and Whitespace
Does manipulating time on the page make your script feel more cinematic?
Chas and Stu are joined by Khrob Edmonds - an award-winning filmmaker - to discuss manipulation of time&hellip…
⏱ 1h 49m
Words · Genre · Process | 16 DEC 2014
Listen if you want your screenplay to feel cinematic before a director ever reads it.
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