DZ-105: Establishing Tone – Dark

How can we teach the reader to find the humour in our darkness?

Chas and Stu finally start their long-mooted exploration of tone with a series that examines films and shows with unusual tones and dives into how the writers establish those tones in the first 5 pages.

How does your script want your reader to experience violence in your story? Humour? Sex? Prejudice?

To answer these questions, this episode look at how films with “darker” or “sadder” tones teach the reader what they can laugh at, namely: THE NICE GUYS, THE BANSHEES OF INISHERIN and the pilot for YELLOWJACKETS.

Together they learn how to better talk about tone, how to frame tone for a scene or sequence, and what levers writers can use on the page to compensate for cinematic tools like music, performance, composition, lighting, design, editing, etc etc etc.

Future episodes plan to explore establishing lighter or quirkier tones, as well as tools in shifting or changing tone on the page.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

CHAPTERS:

  • 00:00:00 – Cold Open
  • 00:00:32 – What is tone?
  • 00:25:00 – The Nice Guys
  • 00:55:07 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
  • 00:57:23 – The Banshees of Inisherin
  • 01:25:06 – Yellowjackets
  • 01:53:30 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up
  • 02:04:40 – Many thanks to our Patreons!

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DZ-104: Characters Alone – Dramatizing the internal

How can scenes where characters are alone increase our connection with them?

In this episode, we explore the audience’s connection with characters through the lens of characters being alone.

Chas and Stu breakdown scenes (and their scripts) from AFTERSUN, SENSE AND SENSIBILITY and THE EQUALIZER to discuss the significance of solitude in giving the audience insight into a character’s interiority. We talk how big print can reflect character; how finding moments for vulnerability allows characters to drop their masks; and how staging can help these moments occur organically.

Thanks to Chris Walker for editing this episode.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

CHAPTERS

  • 00:00:02 – Cold Open
  • 00:00:24 – Intro: Character’s Alone
  • 00:13:04 – Aftersun
  • 00:31:55 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
  • 00:34:16 – Sense and Sensibility
  • 00:59:59 – The Equalizer
  • 01:25:02 – Wrap Up & Key Learnings
  • 01:28:34 – Many thanks to our Patreons!

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DZ-103: Game of the Scene 2 – Triangle of Sadness, The Favourite

How can games elevate dramatic scenes?

In part two of this two parter, Stu and Chas go further into the game (of the scene) and look at how games force characters *other* than the protagonist to interact. We deep dive into the wonderful social satires of TRIANGLE OF SADNESS and THE FAVOURITE.

We discuss how games reveal character through competency and decisions, how resources and skills impact the tactics that characters employ, and the difference between referees, rule lawyers, rule makers and rule breakers.

Thanks to Chris Walker for editing this episode.

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

CHAPTERS

  • 00:00:00 – Cold Open
  • 00:00:19 – Sponsor: ScriptUp
  • 00:01:45 – Intro: Follow up
  • 00:10:50 – Triangle of Sadness (Parts 1 and 2)
  • 00:35:37 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
  • 00:38:25 – Triangle of Sadness (Part 3)
  • 00:52:51 – The Favourite
  • 01:30:34 – Wrap Up & Key Learnings
  • 01:40:30 – Thanks to our Patreons!

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