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Every episode covering Sequences.


"I think there are three kinds of sequences, fundamentally. I think there are plot sequences, which are sequences that are driven entirely by the plot question, where character can kind of perform underneath, but really the sequence is driven by the plot question. Then you have what I would call plot character sequences, where you do have a plot question that’s primary, but the reason that question is there is really more for the unfolding of character. Then you have a different kind of sequence altogether, which is unusual, much less frequent, but which is a character sequence, where there really isn’t a plot question. The question of what will happen next is not being asked or even explored by the character."

DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity


KEY IDEAS

Sequence Questions Persist Across Drafts

"I'm talking about the questions being posed in an act or a sequence and how those questions get resolved those to me sure stay very much the same throughout the process."

— Chas Fisher (01:05:30) · DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?

Five-Act Structure for Longer Scripts

"I know that I personally really tend to use a five-act structure on anything that's longer than 20 pages. I just find it more helpful for me to have five acts and the turning points and the climaxes and etc within that."

— Mel Killingsworth (00:04:06) · DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?

Second Act Resistance in Structure

"what does the second half of the movie look like? I think there's a lot of people that because writing second acts is so unpleasant that they want to skip to the, you know, the low point and then the, and then coming out the other side."

— Chas Fisher (00:14:58) · DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?

Three Sequence Types

"I think there are three kinds of sequences, fundamentally. I think there are plot sequences, which are sequences that are driven entirely by the plot question, where character can kind of perform underneath, but really the sequence is driven by the plot question. Then you have what I would call plot character sequences, where you do have a plot question that's primary, but the reason that question is there is really more for the unfolding of character. Then you have a different kind of sequence altogether, which is unusual, much less frequent, but which is a character sequence, where there really isn't a plot question. The question of what will happen next is not being asked or even explored by the character."

— Stephen Cleary (00:17:10) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Intensity

"The question you always have to ask in these sequences is where's the intensity. It's either intensity of plot or intensity of plot and character in balance or it's intensity of character, but it always has to be intense. As soon as they get off the beach, suddenly who these people are begins to flower -- you know, suddenly you see Tom Hanks's character, suddenly you see the sergeant, suddenly you see there's a guy who gets given a dagger and he picks it up and he starts to shiver and he starts to break down and getting kind of hysterical crying. So suddenly all that intensity of action is translated to intensity of character."

— Stephen Cleary (00:27:50) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Plot as Meaning

"If you say my life makes sense, then what you're saying is the actions that I take have meaning. And if you say my life makes no sense, then what you're saying is the actions in my life are of no consequence. So in some way, plot at the beginning of a story like that is where the character kind of thinks that they are part of something -- society and a group of relationships, and they can make sense of themselves. Plot is important or has a value. And if they go through their journey and they begin to realize that actually no one cares for them, that society has no interest in them, that there is no way that they're going to fit into this world and there is no place for them -- by the end of that story you only have character. There's no plot. It doesn't matter what Johnny does. Nobody cares."

— Stephen Cleary (00:56:18) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Creating Space for Character

"The point about it being a plot character sequence is, you know, you couldn't do this kind of character work if Jason had the responsibility of driving the plot of the story. You have to give as it were the agency of the action to the opposition to allow Jason the space to start unfolding these questions about himself."

— Stephen Cleary (00:45:42) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Character and Introspection

"The more characterful you get, the more it makes the audience introspective -- makes the audience ask questions about themselves rather than necessarily about what's going on on screen. Because in terms of plot there's nothing to understand; there's nothing happening. Johnny Boy will rant for the next 10 minutes and in terms of action of story nothing is going to happen."

— Stephen Cleary (01:34:17) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

The Inverted Structure

"In Diving Bell and the Butterfly, it's reversed. The character question comes first, unlike Toy Story, unlike 90% of stories. The character question is, will Jean-Dominique Boby find a way to make this existence palatable to himself? Will he be able to reconcile himself to this life? And that question is asked first, and then the plot question comes after. Will Jean-Dominique Boby write a book? And because he writes a book, he finds a way of making his life reconcilable to himself. Most stories have the plot question asked first, made possible by the answer of the character question. If you are doing it the other way around, it's a character-driven story, which is to say the character question comes first and is answered last."

— Stephen Cleary (01:44:17) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Sequences as Rewriting Tool

"This is not a recipe to write, it's a recipe to rewrite. You look at your scene and you say, okay, there is no plot question to this scene. The question that scene is really, what does the character have to understand? It's always about the audience. It's not about the writer, it's not about the characters -- it's about what do the audience understand now."

— Stephen Cleary (02:56:47) · DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

Story Beats Beyond the Three-Act Structure

"I think the biggest thing that I've learned is that I think all these story beats are here. But I think what is actually an unhelpful idea and concept is that there is three acts."

— Chas Fisher (01:22:42) · DZ-2: Do the Screenplay Gurus score big at the Box Office?

Sound Design Creating Character Contrast

"The mirror image is her on land, back on Earth, standing up and being surrounded by sound. And that's something that they've done a very good job of in the film. It's not as written as much on the script, but the sound plays a particularly important role in creating that contrast."

— Stu Willis (00:10:24) · DZ-2: Do the Screenplay Gurus score big at the Box Office?



DZ-68: Using POV to structure KNIVES OUT

How can shifting narrative point of view drive your sequences?
AIEach sequence in Knives Out is analyzed through the lens of narrative point of view, showing how POV shifts function as a sequencing tool that drives the story forward.
⏱ 1h 32m
17 MAY 2020
Listen to help you master the gap between what your audience knows and what your characters know.
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Born out of isolation madness, this episode is an edited version of Draft Zero’s first YouTube livestream. Stu and Chas both watched KNIVES OUT and - together with our listeners - broke down each sequence and turning point by reference to what the audience knows in relation to the characters (aka narrative point of view). They then answer listener questions on KNIVES OUT and much else besides live on air…


DZ-54: Thematic Sequences

How does removing character and plot question force your audience to engage with theme?
AIThe episode builds on the previous conversation about sequence structure, this time isolating thematic sequences as a category that operates by different rules than plot or character sequences.
⏱ 2h 49m
10 OCT 2018
Listen if you want to make theme your primary driver (for a sequence)
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Chas and Stu are joined, once again, by the inestimable Stephen Cleary. This episode is a spiritual sequel to our last episode with Stephen, the one on sequence structure. That episode explored how sequences could be broken into plot, character, and plot/character sequences…


DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity

What gives your sequences their intensity?
AIStephen Cleary spends 3+ hours dissecting how sequences function as structural units that compel audiences through different dramatic mechanisms and pacing strategies.
⏱ 3h 16m
8 JUL 2017
Listen to understand how dramatic questions shape audience engagement and pacing through sequences.
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Chas and Stu are joined for the fourth time by the inestimable Stephen Cleary - this time to take a deep dive into sequences. A real deep dive. A 3+ hour deep dive…


DZ-16: Masters of Time and Whitespace

Does manipulating time on the page make your script feel more cinematic?
AIThe episode uses detailed sequence analysis from WHIPLASH, UP, THE UNTOUCHABLES, and WOMAN IN BLACK to show how time-controlling techniques function within larger structural units of your script.
⏱ 1h 49m
16 DEC 2014
Listen if you want your screenplay to feel cinematic before a director ever reads it.
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DZ-111: Unreliable Narrators and FIGHT CLUB

How does the unreliability of a narrator impact the way a story is told?
AIThe episode examines how Fight Club’s disconnected sequence-driven structure relies on voiceover to create coherence, revealing how narration can mask structural fragmentation.
⏱ 55h 26m
2 JUL 2024
Listen to learn how unreliable narrators shape storytelling through voiceover, structure, and control.
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In this episode, Stu and Mel (sans Chas!) take a deep dive into FIGHT CLUB and its use of the unreliable narrator. This is a bridging episode between our previous episode on VOICEOVER and our forthcoming episode on TALKING TO CAMERA as Fight Club does both.


DZ-106: How do you know if you have enough story?

How do you know if you have enough narrative fuel to write a script?
AIStu recommends grouping scenes into sequences and framing each sequence around a clear question -- combining character and plot together -- as a way to stress-test your story structure.
⏱ 1h 36m
31 DEC 2023
Listen you're not sure whether your idea has enough fuel for 90 pages.
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In this episode, Chas, Stu and Mel attempt to answer a listener question: “In your own pre-writing process, how do you know you have enough for a feature? And do you have a specific pre-writing method you’re going to?”

DZ-98: Ensembles 3 - Character Function & Theme

What effect does adding a ton of characters have on your story?
AIAdding whole storylines separate from the main character requires understanding how sequences can service multiple characters simultaneously, a structural problem the episode works through across its three films.
⏱ 2h 2m
31 MAR 2023
Listen if you're writing an ensemble storiy and want to understand how different characters serve different narrative and thematic functions!
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In Part 3 (the final part? Ha!) of our exploration into ensemble stories, Stu, Chas & Mel examine films whose genres do not conventionally require a ton of characters or that use those ensembles in unconventional ways. In particular, adding whole storylines that are separate from the main character’s story. To that end, we dive into three films that were horrifically snubbed by the Oscars: THE WOMAN KING, RIDERS OF JUSTICE and NOPE…


DZ-44: Marvel - First Acts and Establishing Characters

How can your first act effectively establish your character journey?
AIStu and Chas dissect the sequence structure within these origin films’ first acts to identify which patterns the MCU has refined across six separate attempts at the same problem.
⏱ 2h 7m
17 SEP 2017
Listen if your first act exposition feels clunky--the MCU has a schema for burying backstory inside character introductions.
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First Acts are hard. They have to set so much in motion, especially setting up characters. To help them understand how to write effective first acts better, Stu and Chas turn their analytical gaze to a franchise that has been refining and reiterating its first act “schema” for over a decade... THE MARVEL CINEMATIC UNIVERSE…


DZ-2: Do the Screenplay Gurus score big at the Box Office?

Do the biggest original films of 2013 follow more archetypal - or formulaic - structures?
AIStu and Chas structure their analysis by moving through both films’ sequences to identify whether the pacing and progression follows recognized narrative architecture.
⏱ 1h 33m
17 MAR 2014
Listen if you need to know which guru frameworks actually deliver in Act Three.
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Part 2 of our Screenplay Gurus series takes the same lens from Part 1 — Vogler, Snyder and Hauge — and points it at the two highest-grossing original films of 2013: GRAVITY and FROZEN. No franchise, no sequel. Just the two films that audiences went to see in the biggest numbers that year, and the question of what their scripts actually look like when you run them against the guru formulas…