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Simon Pegg
Writer
Films Discussed 3
- · Hot Fuzz (2007) (w)
- · Shaun Of The Dead (2004) (w)
- · The World's End (2013) (w)
Draft Zero Episodes 3

DZ-117: Pulling Off Tonal Shifts
How can we teach our audience new storytelling rules in the middle of our story?
Following on from our episodes on establishing tone through action lines and through character, this is what we have been building up to: how to pull off a tonal switch… that does NOT throw the audience out of the film. And, in particular, how to pull that off on the page when writers don’t have framing, lighting, music, editing, etc. at our disposal… →
Listen if you want to write tonal pivots that land on the page without a director's toolkit.

DZ-37: Excelling at Exposition (Part 1)
How can you successfully integrate exposition into your story?
In Draft Zero’s first two part episode, Stu & Chas take an in-depth look at one of screenwriting’s most common challenges: EXPOSITION. For many stories there are pre-existing facts that need to be communicated to the audience — whether those facts be about the rules of the world, the nature of a location, character motivations, character backstories or just character names. So how have great writers made exposition move the story forward, rather than stopping it to tell the audience stuff they need to know… →
Listen if your exposition scenes feel like information dumps disguised as dialogue.

DZ-3: Making Unlikeable Protagonists Compelling
How do you make obnoxious a-holes compelling
Stu and Chas delve into unlikable protagonists in comedy. How do filmmakers keep us watching characters who should alienate us? To answer this question, Stu and Chas look at the first 20 pages of HOT FUZZ, AS GOOD AS IT GETS and - of course - GROUNDHOG DAY… →
Listen if you want to understand how filmmakers make audiences care about deeply flawed protagonists
Referenced In
Shot Zero Deep Dives
Framing [between] Them: SHAUN OF THE DEAD by Shot Zero
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