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David Milch
Writer / Director
Films Discussed 1
- · Deadwood (2004) (d/w)
Draft Zero Episodes 1

DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue 2 - Hook and Eye
How can you create flow and contrast in your dialogue?
A full three years after the first instalment (and one of our most popular), Stu and Chas have kidnapped Stephen Cleary to once again develop some craft tools around dialogue. It would be fair to say that - in that time - all three have learnt a lot more about dialogue than they knew in 2016. It would be also fair to say that Stephen perhaps learnt a little more through his research into “genderlect”… →
Listen when you're rewriting dialogue and want to create connection between characters.
